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�师指导四级写作�高:如何改写范文

导读: 新四级(CET-4)考试作文部分题��置�置�生改�,从以�考试的�一部分�到了部分。它影��考生的临场心�,其��性自然�言而喻。考生如何利用考场下的300分钟�3000分钟甚至30000分钟,��充分地准备四级写作,从而能够轻�自如地应对考场上的30分钟呢?

  在�习准备四级写作时,我们应该按照“谋篇�段�����措辞�(如图一)“四步走�的�观�习方��准备。我们应该将以往的范文作为框架,从谋篇布局�手,加以润色字��的修饰,将其��自己的四级高分作文。
  �师指导四级写作�高:如何改写范文
  学习范文或掌�作文是打破�高自己传统写作语言的步。下�我们通过2005年12月四级范文,分�学习如何�纯范文中的“谋篇�段�����措辞�并加以利用,使其��自己的语言。
  Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourist?
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  2. 校园是�应对游客开放,人们看法��
  3. 我认为…考试大论�
  Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?
  Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
  So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
  In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
  首先,�纯范文 “谋篇布局��结构模�。
  段:�出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
  第二段:正�列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
  第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
  其次,�纯范文“段�写作�。��:考试大的美女编辑们
  段�写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方�。
  统一性(unity):段�开头的主题�应该�到��太宽泛,也��太具体,�到有较强的概括性�能使下文�到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首�以设问的方��出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方�从好的方�说明,�一方�从�的方�说明。
  连贯性(coherence):关��是使文章段�之间相互连贯的必��件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion�以“�承转��递进的顺�是文章��清晰,层层展开。
  完整性(completeness):以设问�“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?�开头,这是平时较少�用的段�写作方�——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….�是段�写作分类列举法的典型用法。

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