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  Wordy: While they were playing tennis, she started an argument that lasted all morning.
  Better: During tennis she started an argument that lasted all morning.
  Wordy: When you come to the second traffic light, turn right.
  Better: At the second traffic light turn left.
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  "Two joint partners will present their views over a long-distance telephone call. "
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  Thus college students who do not have sufficient financial backing ,
  也就是 college students who lacks sufficient financial backing。
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