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2015年12月英语四级作文范文:�烟习惯

  写作部分测试学生用英语进行书�表达的能力,所�分值比例为15%,考试时间30分钟,四级�求120-180�。作文一直�以说是英语四级考试的�难点,也是让考生头疼的内容,作文除了需�我们有一定的�汇积累,也需�我们�间断的练习和总结,练习多了�能熟能生巧,�能下笔�章,下�为大家整�了大学英语四级作文范文,供广大考生�考�习。

  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Habit of Smoking with reference to the picture given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1.

  ��考范文】 The Habit of Smoking
  In the picture, cigarettes were put together to form a phrase "THE END", which vividly implies the habit of smoking does a great harm to people's happy life. Smoking poses a potential danger to both the smokers themselves and the non-smokers who breathe in the secondhand smoke, which is even more harmful.
  China has a large smoker population. To make things worse, the people who smoke have been on the rise on a daily basis. Some people, especially youngsters, pick up smoking because they think it's cool. Meanwhile,many others regard smoking cigarettes as a way to release pressure or an important lubricant in the social relationship. The sad thing about all this is that many people, knowing smoking is a bad habit, still hold on to it.
  Currently, perhaps it is not easy to ban the tobacco industry, but it is possible to enforce the no-smoking policy in all public places, making it more and more difficult and inconvenient for smokers to smoke and at the same time. ensuring peoole who do not smoke to have fresh air to breathe.

  ��考译文】 �烟的习惯
  在图片中,一些香烟被拼�了一个英语短语“结��,这生动地暗示了�烟会严��害人们的幸�生活。�烟�仅对于�烟者本身很�险,对�二手烟的��烟者也是如此,而且二手烟的�害更大。中国的烟民数��分庞大,更糟糕的是,�烟的人数�天都在攀�。一些人(尤其是�少年)开始�烟是因为他们觉得�烟很酷。与此�时,还有很多人认为�烟是一�缓解压力的方�,也是社会关系中��的润滑剂。这一切所导致的结果就是许多人�使知��烟是一��好的习惯,也�然�肯戒烟。
目�看�,�缔整个烟�行业�能并�易事,但是我们�以执行在公共场��止�烟的政策。这样,既�以使烟民�烟更加困难和�便,��以����烟的人能够呼�到新鲜的空气。

  ��点用法】
  cigarette香烟 lubricant润滑剂
  imply暗示 hold on to��,�放弃
  do a great harm to…严��害……enforce执行
  secondhand smoke二手烟 ensure确�

 ��法点评】
  1.In the picture,cigarettes were put together to form a phrase“THE ENDâ€�,which vividly impfies the habit of  smoking does a great harm to people's happy life.
首�直入主题,介�图画内容,被动�与��制性定语从�相结�,���活。
  2.To make things worse,the people who smoke have been on the rise on a daily basis.
tomakethingsworse�为“使事情更糟糕的是……�。beonthe rise�为“在��增加�上��。on adaily basis�为“�天�,�用于替�常用表达everyday。这三个短语都是�常地�的表达方�,值得积累。
  3.Tbe sad thing about all this is that many people,knowing smoking is a bad habit,still hold on to it.that引导表语从�,其中的knowing smoking is a bad habit是现在分�短语作让步状语,也是�入语。hold onto�为“��,�放弃�,等�于stickto。
  4.…but it is possible to enforce the no-smoking policy in all public places.making it more and more difficult…and at the same time.ensuring people who do not smoke…to enforce a policy为固定��,�为“推行�一政策�,making…和ensuring…为并列结构,�为现在分�短语作结果状语。在�述问题之��出现实的解决方案,使文章更具深度。

  作文技巧:2015年12月作文52个高分�型|写作12大技巧盘点|备考笔记:写作篇

  作文真题:2006—2015年英语四级作文真题�范文汇总

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