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满分四六级作文,是背“新概念�背出�的

  很多学员通过自学,或者跟��师学习新概念英语学了好久,就是找�到�高英语的真正法则。新概念英语的妙处�是三言两语�以表述清楚,今天,就用新概念三册里的部分���演绎一篇满分六级作文。
  首先展示的是八�新三的��,当把这些��背诵完了以�,就�以仿照类似的结构写一篇满分文章。
  L-45-11:
  As the parents had five children, life was a perpetual struggle against poverty. They were expecting their sixth child and were faced with even more pressing economic problems. If they had only had one child, the fact would have passed unnoticed.
  家里已有五个孩�,全家人常年在贫困中挣扎。第六个孩��将问世,他们�临�更加严峻的�济问题。如果他们�是�得一个孩�的�,这件事情也会悄无声�地过去的。 L-38-13:
  Historians have long been puzzled by dots, lines and symbols.
  历�学家一直被一些点,线和符�感到困惑�解。 L4-7
  I used to work as a dustman in NOS.
  我在新东方任清�工一�。  
  L41-11
  My friend fails to mention the long and friendless winter evenings in front of the TV---virtually the only form of entertainment.
  我的朋�没有�到在电视机�度过漫长而寂寞的冬夜——电视几乎是一的娱�形�。 L33-10
  As if this were not enough to reduce you to tears, your husband arrives.
  如果这还�足以让你掉眼泪,你�公�回�了。
  L12-12
  There were hardly any trees on the island and there was no water, but this did not prove to be a problem.
  岛上几乎没有树和水,但这并�是个问题。 L2-1
  Our vicar is always raising money for one cause or another, but he has never managed to get enough money to have the church clock repaired.
  我们的牧师总是为这事�那事筹集资金,但始终未能筹足资金把教堂的钟修好。 L59-15
  As she is not rich, the chances that she will be able to afford such purchases are remote.
  由于她并�富裕,所以她买得起这些东西的�能性��。
  下�是2005年1月的六级考试作文题目,�过仔细分�,我们�以把文章写�如下的结构,��是�考译文。�篇幅影�,就没有一一去分�写作的�路,但是文章中的好多巨型结构都是上�八�英文��的翻版。
  2005.1 CET-6 Writing:
  1. 对病人的简�介�:目�的病情和家庭情况
  2.目�的困难:无法继续承担医疗费用,需�护�
  3.希望�助,�系方�
  Dear friends,
  Here is a story of an unfortunate boy.
  Jack, an undergraduate of English College, has long been assailed by grave disease. He was born in a miserable family where life is a perpetual struggle against poverty. His father works as a dustman with narrow wages, virtually the only source of income of the family. Life is wretched indeed. As if this were not enough to reduce them to tears, the father had his both legs broken some time ago The loss of job makes the whole family faced with even more economic odds. Normal living proves to be a problem, not to mention the huge sums of medical expenses. Chances that he will be fully recovered are remote considering the lack of money
  So, we shouldn’t let the misfortune pass unnoticed. On behalf of the student union, I would like to ask for your help. Your kindness and generosity will put the family out of trouble. Whoever will make donations is requested to dial 010-62605000
  Profound thanks from,
  Student Union
  朋�们:
  下�是一则有关一个�幸男孩的故事:
  Jack是一个英语学院的本科生,一直被严�的疾病折磨�。他出生在一个凄惨的家庭,长年生活拮�。他爸爸是个清�工,挣钱很少而且是家庭收入的一��。生活确实很惨。如果这还�足以使他们掉眼泪的�,他爸爸在�段时间�摔伤了腿。失业使得整个家庭的生活更加困难。正常的生活都还是个问题,更别�高昂的医疗费用了。所以他痊愈的�能性太渺茫了。考虑到没钱,他痊愈的�能性太渺茫了。
  因此,我们�能让这样的�幸就悄无声�地过去了。我�代表学生会,请求大家伸出�助之手。你的善良和解囊将使这个家庭摆脱困难。若��助,请拨:010—62605000。
  �常感谢�
  学生会仔细�摩上�的文章,�学们�难�现,通过背诵新概念三册里的黄金�型,�以�常好地指导��在四�六级的作文考试。所以,新概念英语的学习,务必�在专业�师的指导下,详细讲解新概念的�个��的特点和使用方�,这样�能真正�义上学出新概念的精髓,看到这本世纪�典教�背�的美丽。

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