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  2013å¹´12月的四级写作真题ä¸ï¼Œå¤šé¢˜å¤šå�·ä¸å‡ºçŽ°çš„ä¸‰é�“写作题å�‡ä¸ºæ¼«ç”»ä½œæ–‡ï¼Œå�¯è§�漫画作文现在是四级作文的考查é‡�点。为了帮助å�Œå¦ä»¬è½»æ�¾åº”对四级漫画作文,本文拟从审题ã€�布局和主体段的论è¯�方法三个角度æ��出四级漫画作文的写作攻略,以帮助考生应对这ç§�比较特殊的写作题型。下é�¢å°±ä¸€èµ·æ�¥çœ‹2014å¹´6月英è¯å››çº§ä½œæ–‡å¤‡è€ƒï¼šæ¼«ç”»ä½œæ–‡åº”对攻略。
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  四级漫画作文ä¸çš„æ¼«ç”»é€šå¸¸å��æ˜ ä¸€ä¸ªç¤¾ä¼šçŽ°è±¡æˆ–ç”Ÿæ´»å“²ç�†ï¼Œè¦�æ±‚è€ƒç”Ÿæ ¹æ�®è‡ªå·±å¯¹æ¼«ç”»çš„ç�†è§£æ�¥å†™ä½œã€‚å› æ¤ï¼Œè¦�å†™å¥½å››çº§æ¼«ç”»ä½œæ–‡ï¼Œå®¡é¢˜æ ¼å¤–é‡�è¦�。考生在下笔之å‰�è¦�仔细看漫画,弄清漫画的寓æ„�ï¼Œè¿™æ˜¯æ–‡ç« åˆ‡é¢˜çš„ä¿�è¯�。æ¤å¤–,在本次四级考试的三é�“写作题ä¸ï¼ŒDirections部分都给出了写作内容的大致方å�‘,这也为考生把æ�¡æ¼«ç”»å¯“æ„�æ��供了帮助。下é�¢ç¬”者就æ�¥é€�一梳ç�†2013å¹´6月四级作文的三幅漫画å�Šå…¶ä¼ 达的寓æ„�。
  题目一

  2014å¹´6月英è¯å››çº§ä½œæ–‡å¤‡è€ƒï¼šæ¼«ç”»ä½œæ–‡åº”对攻略
  Directions: For this part, you’re allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description ofthe picture and then express your views on the importance of reading literature. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
  审题:本题的漫画å��æ˜ çš„æ˜¯ä¸€ä¸ªç¤¾ä¼šçŽ°è±¡ã€‚åœ¨æ¼«ç”»ä¸ï¼Œè€�师把一本厚厚的书交给å¦ç”Ÿï¼Œå¹¶å¯¹ä»–说:“Just think of it as if you’re reading a longtext-message.â€�结å�ˆé¢˜ç›®ä¸çš„写作指令(express your views on theimportance of reading literature),考生å�¯ä»¥å¾—出这幅漫画所å��æ˜ çš„ç¤¾ä¼šçŽ°è±¡ï¼šéš�ç�€æ–°çš„电å�媒体的出现,文å¦é˜…读日æ¸�å¼�微。需è¦�æ��醒考生的是,漫画ä¸çš„text-message象å¾�ç�€å½“代层出ä¸�穷的新媒体,这里并ä¸�需è¦�对其å�šè¿‡äºŽç‹éš˜çš„ç�†è§£ã€‚
  题目二

  Directions: For this part, you’reallowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with abrief description of the picture and then express your views on the importanceof doing small things before undertaking something big. You should write atleast 120 words but no more than 180 words.
ã€€ã€€å®¡é¢˜ï¼šæœ¬é¢˜çš„æ¼«ç”»ä¸æœ‰ä¸€å¯¹çˆ¶å�。儿å�说:“Dad, I’m a bit worried about disposing of nuclear waste.â€�爸爸说:“If you can empty the dustbin here, you can do anything.â€�è¿™å¹…æ¼«ç”»ä¼ è¾¾çš„æ˜¯ä¸€ä¸ªäººç”Ÿé�“ç�†ï¼šæƒ³å�šå¤§äº‹ï¼Œè¦�先从å°�事å�šèµ·ã€‚一屋ä¸�扫,何以扫天下?如果考生没有从漫画ä¸çœ‹å‡ºè¿™å±‚æ„�æ€�,也å�¯ä»¥ç»“å�ˆå†™ä½œæŒ‡ä»¤(express your views on the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big)看出这一点。
  题目三

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  Directions: For this part, you’reallowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with abrief description of the picture and then express your views on the importanceof learning basic skills. You should write at least 120 words but no more than180 words.
  审题:在本题的漫画ä¸ï¼Œä¸€ä½�è€�师æ£åœ¨æ•™ä¸€ç¾¤å°�å¦ç”Ÿä¹˜æ³•表,å©å�们å�´é�¢éœ²ç–‘色,其ä¸ä¸€ä¸ªå¦ç”Ÿå�‘è€�师表达了大家心ä¸çš„疑虑:“No offense, but by the time we’re in the job market, won’t that stuff be outdated?â€�结å�ˆå†™ä½œæŒ‡ä»¤(express your views on the importance of learning basic skills),考生ä¸�难看出这幅漫画æ„�在强调å¦ä¹ 基本技能的é‡�è¦�性。
  第二�谋篇布局
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  段:开门è§�山,简è¦�æ��述一下漫画内容,并指出漫画的寓æ„�。æ��述漫画内容是为了æ�示其ä¸çš„寓æ„�,是手段而ä¸�是目的,所以æ��è¿°è¦�简æ´�明快,一般æ�¥è¯´ä¸€å�¥è¯�足矣。需è¦�æ��醒考生的是,写作的Directions部分虽然给出了大致的写作主题,但是也è¦�求考生对漫画进行简è¦�æ��è¿°ï¼Œå› æ¤è€ƒç”Ÿåˆ‡ä¸�å�¯æŠ›å¼€æ¼«ç”»å†…容直接展开议论。
  第二段:表达考生对漫画寓æ„�çš„çœ‹æ³•ï¼Œè¿™æ˜¯æ–‡ç« çš„é‡�心所在。比如,就é�“写作题目而言,考生应在第二段é˜�述阅读文å¦ä½œå“�çš„é‡�è¦�性;就第二é�“写作题目而言,考生应在第二段论述为什么凡事必须从å°�事å�šèµ·;就第三é�“写作题目而言,考生应在第二段论述掌æ�¡åŸºæœ¬æŠ€èƒ½çš„é‡�è¦�性。
  第三段:指出漫画的寓æ„�对大å¦ç”Ÿçš„æ•™è‚²æ„�义,或者æ��出解决问题的建议。考生需è¦�注æ„�的是,结尾段一般并ä¸�需è¦�实质性的分æž�,其主è¦�作用是总结和å�‡å�Žï¼Œä½¿æ–‡ç« 结构完整。所以结尾段的写作è¦�简明扼è¦�,点到å�³æ¢ã€‚
  第三�论�方法
  漫画作文的第二段è¦�表达考生对漫画寓æ„�çš„çœ‹æ³•ï¼Œè¿™æ˜¯æ–‡ç« çš„æ ¸å¿ƒæ®µè�½ï¼Œä¹Ÿæ˜¯ä½œæ–‡å—数达到è¦�æ±‚çš„å…³é”®ã€‚å› æ¤ï¼Œè€ƒç”Ÿåœ¨è¿™ä¸€æ®µè¦�浓墨é‡�彩,写深ã€�写é€�。在写这一段时,考生è¦�å°½é‡�摆事实ã€�讲é�“ç�†ï¼Œé�¿å…�ç©ºæ³›çš„è®®è®ºã€‚é’ˆå¯¹è¿™ä¸€æ ¸å¿ƒæ®µè�½ï¼Œç¬”è€…åœ¨æ¤æŽ¨è��以下三ç§�展开议论的常用方法,希望对考生有所å�¯å�‘。
  1.�分缕�
  在写作第二段时,考生å�¯ä»¥ä»Ž2~3个方é�¢å¯¹è§‚点展开论述,这ç§�写法å�¯ä½¿æ–‡ç« 显得层次清楚ã€�æ�¡ç�†æ¸…晰。例如,本次四级作文é�“题目的第二段需è¦�é˜�述阅读文å¦ä½œå“�çš„é‡�è¦�性,考生就å�¯ä»¥ä»Žä»¥ä¸‹ä¸¤ä¸ªæ–¹é�¢å±•开:,相对于电å�媒体,文å¦é˜…读更能培养人的想象力;第二,阅读文å¦ä½œå“�能够帮助我们更好地了解社会。请å�‚考下é�¢çš„范文。
  There wasa time when children could relish (欣�/ 也�以使用appreciate 替�) literature. But childrentoday can enjoy the sounds and action on a TV or computer screen. “So why bother reading?� some ask. The reasonis obvious: It enriches our imagination. When we read apiece of literature, we are living the life of RobinHood or starting an adventure with Tom Sawyer. In addition, literature is the mirror of society,whether it be poetry, drama or fiction. We know thesociety better through literature.
  2.举例论�
ã€€ã€€å¦‚æžœæ¼«ç”»æ‰€ä¼ è¾¾çš„æ˜¯æŠ½è±¡çš„äººç”Ÿå“²ç�†ï¼Œé‚£ä¹ˆè€ƒç”Ÿåœ¨è®ºè¿°æ—¶èƒ½ä¸¾å‡ºå…·ä½“的事例,尽é‡�é�¿å…�空洞的说教。比如,就本次四级作文第二é�“题目而言,考生å�¯ä»¥åœ¨ç¬¬äºŒæ®µä¸ä¸¾å‡ºä¸€äº›æˆ�功人士如何从å°�事å�šèµ·çš„例å�。笔者下é�¢æ��供的范文ä¸ç”¨åˆ°çš„æ˜¯å“ˆå…°·æ¡‘å¾·æ–¯ä¸Šæ ¡ä»Žä¸€ä¸ªå°�å�ƒåº—å�šèµ·ï¼Œå�Žç¼”é€ å‡ºé��布全ç�ƒçš„肯德基快é¤�å¸�国的例å�,用以è¯�明å�ªæœ‰ä»Žå°�事å�šèµ·ï¼Œæ‰�能æˆ�就大事。请看下é�¢çš„范文。
  Everything is smallbefore it is big. A good example is KFC. In 1930 Colonel Harland Sanders beganserving food to his service station customers in Corbin, a city in Kentucky. He fried chicken in his own kitchen andperfected his secret recipe there. From the small roadside eatery, he went on to build an empire of fast food.
  3.类比论�
  如果漫画ä¸çš„寓æ„�ä¸�容易通过具体的事例æ�¥è¯�明,那么考生还å�¯ä»¥ä½¿ç”¨ç±»æ¯”论è¯�的方法,å�³é€šè¿‡æ‰“比方æ�¥è®ºè¯�一个抽象的é�“ç�†ã€‚比如,对于本次四级作文的第三é�“题目,考生å�¯ä»¥åœ¨ç¬¬äºŒæ®µä¸ç”¨å¦ä¹ 打篮ç�ƒçš„过程æ�¥æ‰“比方。å¦ä¹ 打篮ç�ƒæ—¶ï¼Œå�ªæœ‰å…ˆå¦ä¼šäº†æŠ•ç�ƒã€�è¿�ç�ƒã€�ä¼ ç�ƒè¿™äº›åŸºæœ¬æŠ€èƒ½ï¼Œæ‰�能进一æ¥å¦ä¹ 高难度的技能。以æ¤ç±»æŽ¨ï¼Œæ— 论å�šä»»ä½•事情,å�ªæœ‰æŽŒæ�¡äº†åŸºæœ¬çš„æŠ€èƒ½ï¼Œæ‰�å�¯èƒ½å�–得更大的æˆ�功。æ¤å¤–,考生还å�¯ä»¥ä¸¾å‡ºç»Ÿè®¡æ•°å—ï¼Œç”¨å…·ä½“çš„ç ”ç©¶ç»“æžœæ�¥è¯�明论点。请看下é�¢çš„范文。
  Simple as they mayseem, basic skills serve as the first link in the chain of success. Thisis analogous to learning to play basketball. If shooting, dribbling and passing are not mastered,learning advanced skills will become difficult, if notimpossible. A growing body of research has also documented that such basicskills as reading, writing and computing are highlycorrelated with success later in life. A 2012 study surveyed 300 CEOs ofFortune 500 companies and found that 87% attributed part of their success tothe basic skills they learned in primary school.
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