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  The chart has clearly revealed the differences between female and male students in their job preferences and choices after graduation.
  The most desired jobs for boys, according to priority, are managers, businessmen and lawyers. Girls also like to pursue these professions, but the percentage drops considerably, compared with the great number of girls who are interested in becoming teachers.
  What has brought about this result? I believe that many girls may prefer the teaching positions because they like to take care of and give guidance to the younger generation, while boys like to become managers and businessmen because they like the idea of standing up to challenges and want to prove that they have it in them to be both socially and financially successful.
  The findings will definitely exert some influence on the university education in China. to better prepare the students for their future jobs, all universities and colleges in China should take into consideration students' job preferences, when they design syllabuses and offer courses to their students.
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