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�师指导:如何写出英语四六级高分作文��

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导读: [导读]英语是一��型结构�活多�的语言。如何写出英语四六级高分作文��,�师为你们解答:

  一���开头多样化
  英语是一��型结构�活多�的语言。由于拘泥于传统语法框架,许多�学写作的人都喜欢用��开头写��。这样写倒是无��议,但若通篇文章都是干巴巴的�样结构的��,就显得呆�生硬,缺�生气了。事实上,在英语写作中除���放在��的开头外,许多其它�类��组��放在��开头的�置。
   例�:Women leave their homes to take a fuller part in society as time passes.
  上�这��至少还有两�开头方�:
  1. As time passes, women leave their homes to take a fuller part in society.
  2. To take a fuller part in society, women leave their homes as time passes.
  二���一个“I�写到底
  �学英文写作的人的�一通病是一个“I�写到底,�首僵硬,缺��化。
  试读下�这段文章:
  One thing in particular I remember made me feel grateful toward my mother was that one day I went and asked her for my own garden, and she let me have my own little plot. I love it and take care of it well. I loved especially to grow peas. I was proud when we had them on our table. I would pull out the grass in my garden by hand when the first little blades came up. I would patrol the rows on my hands and knees for any worms and bugs, and I would kill and bury them.
  上�这一段共用了八个“I�。当然上文若出自一个幼童笔下,倒��天真纯朴的趣味。�妨改写如下:
  According to my recollection, one thing in particular that made me feel grateful toward my mother was the day I went and asked her for my own garden, and she did let me have my own little plot. I love it and take care of it well, especially the growing of peas. Having them on the table made me proud. I would pull out the grass in my garden by hand when the first little blades came up and would patrol the rows on my hands and knees for any worms and bugs, killing them and burying them.
  改写�的段�仅有三个“I�,一看就出自�人手笔。考试大论�
  三� 注���的紧凑性
  1. 当两个��是围绕��一主题的��方�进行说明时,�以将两�中相�的�分�略,形�并列�,从而使��更加紧凑。这也就是�略结构所表达出的英文的紧凑性。需�注�的是两�中形�对应关系的something�完全一致��以�略,而且与相��分相关的短语(主�是动�短语中的介�)��以�略。�外,如果表示比较结构的����有相��分,而且此�分有短语修饰,��的相��分�由代��置�,而�能直接将其�略。(如下�的例�三)
  例�: They should acquire knowledge not only from books but also from the society.
  他们�仅�从书本中学习知识,还�从社会中汲�知识。
  Either Sally must be responsible for the matter or we’ll be (responsible for the matter).或者赛丽对此事负责,或者由我们�承担责任。
  The population of this country is three times as large as that of its neighbor.
  这个国家的人�是它邻国的三�。(汉语�以说是它邻国的三�,但英语一定�说是它邻国的人�的三�,这也是英语较为汉语更为严密的一�表现)
  2. �件�也是使��紧凑的一�表达方�。这里我们介�一下in which在�件�中的用法,它相当于�件�的引导�if,这时�译作“如果...那么...�或“当...时�。
  例�:An ensemble that performs B in which the other performs A is excused from the rehearsal after that concert.
  当�外一个�团演�A(�曲)时,那麽演�B(�曲)的�团就有充分的�由�去彩排了。

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