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2010年12月英语四级写作范文�点评(新东方)

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  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent? You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.
  1.目��少父�为孩�包办一切;
  2.为了帮助孩�独立,父�应该……
  范文:
  How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?
  Currently, many parents, if not most, care too much about their children, which makes their kids not as independent as we desire. Undoubtedly, the growth of each kid, exerts a profound impact for the entire family. Time after time newspapers carry articles pertaining to the educational style, and thus the media and officials are supposed to strive for a healthy way to educate our children.
  The present situation being so serious, it is imperative for us to take drastic measures and do not keep turning a blind eye to them. The first and key point is that parents themselves, rather than anybody else, have the responsibility to provide their children with a more independent living atmosphere. Another method, similarly indispensable, is that it is high time that children enhance their awareness of being independent. With these measures taken, it is reasonable for us to believe that the problem will be addressed in the near future.
  It is true that children need delicate care. Nonetheless, children will one day grow up and face the cruel world on their own. In order to make our children adapt to the fierce competition when they become mature, the whole society, especially parents are bound to give our children a more independent surrounding.
  点评:
  如果说2010年6月的四级考试作文让人觉得过于中规中矩的�,那么本次2010年12月的四级作文没有让我们失望。关于�少年教育的�题,一直是整个社会关注的�点,�以说这个�题既�是为热点的�题,也�是一个�度冷门的�题。客观的说,这是一个次热点�题。�论�题是什么,���学们能够判断出这是一篇社会热点�题,那么写作�路和相关�路就应该立刻应�而生。
  永�的三段�:考试大论�
  1��出问题(背景介�+公众观点);
  2�分�问题(原因,�害,影�等);
  3�解决问题 (表明问题�以解决+相关的解决措施)
  所以在构�本文时,我们完全�以照�这��路:
  段� 先介�关于家长溺爱孩�这一现象的普�存在,并指出其�害。这当中�以用到我们讲过的�入语,被动语����语从�。
  第二段� 主体段���出具体解决措施。分�措施时,从�观和微观入手。既涉�到家长和社会,�关乎孩�自己。
  第三段� 在结尾段中,我们应该把�心放在问题是�以解决的,并在此呼�整个社会给孩�一个独立的�长环境。本段�中。�以用到倒装,虚拟语气等��。
  有了清晰的�路,我们�进一步完善自己的�汇和��。在措辞时,除了基本用�的�级之外,大家还�注�逻辑连接�的巧妙使用。如本文中在列举措施时,没有用简�的firstly,secondly。�在��方�,大家�以将平时学到的���典��尽�用在文章中,力求达到润色文章的作用。
  通过对近几次的四级考试的把�,未�的四级考生们也�以得到一些信�,四级的写作考题越�越关注考生的综�能力,其中包括对于社会问题的关心和一些热点问题的了解,当然更需�平日里对英文�汇使用的积累和实践,希望�学们在本次考试中�挥出良好的水平,�得优异的�绩!

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